
Nefertiti
by Michelle Moran
ISBN:
0307381463
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The sweeping story of a powerful Egyptian family, Nefertiti: A Novel tells the tale of two sisters, the first of whom is destined to rule as one of history’s most fascinating queens.
Beautiful Nefertiti and her sister, Mutnodjmet, have been raised far from the court of their aunt, the Queen of Egypt. But when the Pharaoh of Egypt dies, their father’s power play makes Nefertiti wife to the new and impetuous king. It is hoped she will temper King Amunhotep’s desire to overturn Egypt’s religion, but the ambitious Nefertiti encourages Amunhotep’s outrageous plans instead, winning the adoration of the people while making powerful enemies at court. Younger yet more prudent, Mutnodjmet is her sister’s sole confidant, and only she knows to what lengths Nefertiti will go for a child to replace the son of Amunhotep’s first wife.
As King Amunhotep’s commands become more extravagant, he and Nefertiti ostracize the army, clergy, and Egypt’s most powerful allies. Then, when Mutnodjmet begins a dangerous affair with a general, she sees how tenuous her situation is at her own sister’s court. An epic story that resurrects ancient Egypt in vivid detail, Nefertiti: A Novel.
REVIEWS
“Brings ancient Egypt to life as two royal sisters struggle to find fulfillment and happiness—one craving ultimate political power, the other desiring only to follow her heart.” India Edghill, author of Wisdom’s Daughter
“There haven’t been two more fascinating or outrageous siblings since the Boleyn sisters burst onto the pages of historical fiction. Nefertiti is totally obsessive reading.” Robin Maxwell, author of The Secret Diary of Anne Boleyn
“A provocative portrait of limitless power in an ancient land of limitless fascination.” Ki Longfellow, author of The Secret Magdalene
PROLOGUE
If you are to believe what the viziers say, then Amunhotep killed his brother
for the crown of Egypt.
In the third month of Akhet, Crown Prince Tuthmosis lay in his room in Malkata
Palace. A warm wind stirred the curtains of his chamber, carrying with it the
desert scents of zaatar and myrrh. With each breeze the long linens danced,
wrapping themselves around the columns of the palace, brushing the sun-dappled
tiles on the floor. But while the twenty-year-old Prince of Egypt should have
been riding to victory at the head of Pharaoh’s charioteers, he was lying in his
bedchamber, his right leg supported by cushions, swollen and crushed. The
chariot that had failed him had immediately been burned, but the damage was
done. His fever was high and his shoulders slumped. And while the jackal-headed
god of death crept closer, Amunhotep sat across the room on a gilded chair, not
even flinching when his older brother spat up the wine-colored phlegm that
spelled a possible death to the viziers.
When Amunhotep couldn’t stand any more of his brother’s sickness, he stalked
from the chamber and stood on a balcony overlooking Thebes. He crossed his arms
over his golden pectoral, watching the farmers with their emmer wheat,
harvesting in the heavy heat of the day. Their silhouettes moved across the
temples of Amun, his father’s greatest contributions to the land. He stood above
the city, thinking of the message that had summoned him from Memphis to his
brother’s side, and as the sun sank lower he grew besieged by visions of what
now might be. Amunhotep the Great. Amunhotep the Builder. Amunhotep the
Magnificent. He could imagine it all, and it was only when a new moon rose over
the horizon that the sound of sandals slapping against tile made him turn.
“Your brother has called you back into his chamber.”
“Now?”
Queen Tiye turned her back on her son. “Yes.”
Amunhotep followed her sharp footfalls into Tuthmosis’s room. Inside, the
viziers of Egypt had gathered. Amunhotep swept the chamber with a glance. These
were old men loyal to his father, men who had always loved his older brother
more than him. “You may leave,” he announced, and the viziers turned to the
queen in shock.
“You may go,” she repeated. But when the old men were gone, she warned her son
sharply, “You will not treat the wise men of Egypt like slaves.”
“They are slaves! Slaves to the priests of Amun who control more land and gold
than we do. If Tuthmosis had lived to be crowned, he would have bowed to the
priests like every Pharaoh that came—”
Queen Tiye’s slap reverberated across the chamber. “You will not speak that way
while your brother is still alive!”
Amunhotep inhaled sharply and watched his mother move to Tuthmosis’s side.
The queen caressed the prince’s cheek with her hand. Her favorite son, the one
who was courageous in battle as well as life. They were so much alike, even
sharing the same auburn hair and light eyes. “Amunhotep is here to see you,” she
whispered, the braids from her wig brushing his face. Tuthmosis struggled to sit
and the queen moved to help him, but he waved her away.
“Leave us. We will talk alone.”
Tiye hesitated.
“It’s fine,” Tuthmosis promised.
The two princes of Egypt watched their mother go, and only Anubis, who weighs
the heart of the dead against the feather of truth, knows for certain what
happened after the queen left that chamber. But there are many viziers who
believe that when judgment comes, Amunhotep’s heart will outweigh the feather.
They think it has been made heavy with evil deeds, and that Ammit, the crocodile
god, will devour it, condemning him to oblivion for eternity. Whatever the
truth, that night the crown prince, Tuthmosis, died, and a new crown prince rose
to take his place.
CHAPTER ONE
1351 BCE
Peret, the Season of Growing
When the sun set over Thebes, splaying its last rays over the limestone cliffs,
we walked in a long procession across the sand. In the twisting line that
threaded between the hills, the viziers of Upper and Lower Egypt came first,
then the priests of Amun, followed by hundreds of mourners. The sand cooled
rapidly in the shadows. I could feel the grains between the toes of my sandals
and when the wind blew under my thin linen robe I shivered. I stepped out of
line so I could see the sarcophagus, carried on a sledge by a team of oxen so
the people of Egypt would know how wealthy and great our crown prince had been.
Nefertiti would be jealous she’d had to miss this.
I will tell her all about it when I get home, I thought. If she is being nice to
me.
The bald-headed priests walked behind our family, for we were even more
important than the representatives of the gods. The incense they swung from
golden balls made me think of giant beetles, stinking up the air whichever way
they went. When the funeral procession reached the mouth of the valley, the
rattling of the sistrums stopped and the mourners went silent. On every cliff
families had gathered to see the prince, and now they looked down as the High
Priest of Amun performed the Opening of the Mouth, to give Tuthmosis back his
senses in the Afterlife. The priest was younger than the viziers of Egypt, but
even so men like my father stood back, deferring to his power when he touched a
golden ankh to the mouth of the figure on the sarcophagus and announced, “The
royal falcon has flown to heaven. Amunhotep the Younger is arisen in his place.”
A wind echoed between the cliffs and I thought I could hear the rush of the
falcon’s wings as the crown prince was freed from his body and ascended to the
sky. There was a great amount of shuffling, children looking around the legs of
their parents to see the new prince. I too craned my neck.
“Where is he?” I whispered. “Where is Amunhotep the Younger?”
“In the tomb,” my father replied. His bald head shone dully in the setting sun,
and in the deepening of the shadows his face appeared hawkish.
“But doesn’t he want the people to see him?” I asked.
“No, senit.” His word for little girl. “Not until he’s been given what his
brother was promised.”
I frowned. “And what is that?”
He clenched his jaw. “The co-regency,” he replied.
When the ceremony was finished soldiers spread out to stop commoners from
following us into the valley, and our small party was expected to walk on alone.
Behind us, the team of oxen heaved, pulling their cargo across the sand. All
around us cliffs rose against the darkening sky. “We will be climbing,” my
father warned, and my mother paled. We were cats, she and I, frightened of
places we couldn’t understand, valleys whose sleeping Pharaohs watched from
secret chambers. Nefertiti would have crossed this valley without pause, a
falcon in her fearlessness, just like our father.
We walked to the eerie rattle of the sistrums and I watched my golden sandals
reflect the dying light. As we ascended the cliffs, I stopped to look down over
the land.
“Don’t stop,” my father cautioned. “Keep going.”
We trudged onward through the hills while the animals snorted their way up the
rocks. The priests went before us now, carrying torches to light our way as we
walked, then the High Priest hesitated, and I wondered if he’d lost his bearing
in the night.
“Untie the sarcophagus and free the oxen,” he commanded, and I saw, carved into
the face of the cliff, the entrance to the tomb. Children shifted in their beads
and women’s bangles clinked together as they passed each other looks. Then I saw
the narrow staircase leading down into the earth and understood their fear.
“I don’t like this,” my mother whispered.
The priests relieved the oxen of their burden, heaving the gilded sarcophagus
onto their backs. Then my father squeezed my hand to give me courage and we
followed our dead prince into his chamber, out of the dying sun and into total
darkness.
Carefully, so as not to slip on the rocks, we descended into the slick bowels of
the earth, staying close to the priests and their reed-dipped torches. Inside
the tomb, the light cast shadows across the painted scenes of Tuthmosis’ twenty
years in Egypt. There were women dancing, wealthy noblemen hunting, Queen Tiye
serving her eldest son honeyed lotus and wine. I pressed my mother’s hand for
comfort and when she said nothing I knew she was offering up silent prayers to
Amun.
Below us, the heavy air grew dank and the smell of the tomb became that of
shifted earth. Images appeared and disappeared in the flickering torchlight,
yellow painted women and laughing men, children floating lotus blossoms along
the River Nile. But most fearsome was the blue faced god of the underworld,
holding the crook and flail of Egypt. “Osiris,” I whispered, and no one heard.
We kept walking, into the most secretive chambers of the earth, then suddenly we
entered a vaulted room and I gasped. This was where all the prince’s earthly
treasures were gathered; painted barges, golden chariots, sandals trimmed in
leopard fur. We passed through this room to the innermost burial chamber, and my
father leaned close to me and whispered meaningfully, “Remember what I told
you.”
Inside the empty chamber Pharaoh and his queen stood side by side. In the light
of the torches it was impossible to see anything but their shadowy figures and
the long sarcophagus of the departed prince. I stretched out my arms in
obeisance and my aunt nodded solemnly at me, remembering my face from her
infrequent visits to our family in Akhmim. my father had taken Nefertiti and me
to Thebes only once. He kept us away from the palace, from the intrigues and
ostentation of the court. Now, in the flickering light of the tomb, I saw that
the queen hadn’t changed in the six years since I had last seen her. She was
still small and pale. Her light eyes appraised me as I held out my arms and I
wondered what she thought of my dark skin and unusual height. I straightened,
and the High Priest of Amun opened the Book of the Dead, his voice intoning the
words of dying mortals to the gods.
“Let my soul come to me from wherever it is. Come for my soul, O you Guardians
of the heavens. May my soul see my corpse, may it rest on my mummified body
which will never be destroyed or perish…”
I searched the chamber for Amunhotep the Younger. He was standing away from the
sarcophagus and the canopic jars that would carry Tuthmosis’ organs to the
Afterlife. He was taller than I was, handsome despite his light curling hair,
and I wondered if we could expect great things from him when it was his brother
who had always been meant to reign. He shifted toward a statue of the goddess
Mut and I remembered that Tuthmosis had been a cat-lover in his life. With him
would go his beloved Ta-Miw, wrapped inside her own miniature sarcophagus of
gold. I touched my mother’s arm gently and she turned.
“Did they kill her?” I whispered, and she followed my eyes to the little coffin
beside the prince.
My mother shook her head, and as the priests took up the sistrums she replied,
“They said she stopped eating once the crown prince died.”
The High Priest began chanting the Song to the Soul, a lament to Osiris and the
jackal god, Anubis. Then he snapped shut the Book of the Dead and announced,
“The blessing of the organs.”
Queen Tiye stepped forward. She knelt in the dirt, kissing each of the canopic
jars in turn. Then Pharaoh did the same, and I saw him turn sharply, searching
for his younger son. “Come,” he commanded.
But his youngest son didn’t move.
“Come!” he shouted. His voice was magnified a hundred times in the chamber.
No one breathed. I looked at my father and he shook his head sternly.
“Why should I bow to him in obeisance,” Amunhotep asked. “He would have handed
Egypt over to the Amun priests like every king that came before him!”
I gasped, and for a moment I thought the Elder would move across the burial
chamber and kill him. But Amunhotep was his only surviving son, the only
legitimate heir to Egypt’s throne, and like every seventeen year-old crown
prince in our history, the people would expect to see him enthroned as co-ruler
with his father. The Elder would be Pharaoh of Lower Egypt and Thebes, and
Amunhotep co-regent of Upper Egypt from Memphis. If this son also died, the
Elder’s line would be finished. The queen walked swiftly to where her youngest
son stood. “You will bless your brother’s organs,” she commanded.
“Why?”
“Because he is a Prince of Egypt!”
“And so am I!”
Queen Tiye’s eyes narrowed. “Your brother served this kingdom by joining Egypt’s
army. He was a High Priest of Amun, dedicated to the gods.”
Amunhotep laughed sharply. “So you loved him better because he could butcher
what he blessed?” He moved quickly, stooping rashly before Pharaoh. “I will
become a warrior like my brother,” he swore. The hem of his white cloak trailed
in the dirt and the viziers shook their heads. “Together, you and I can raise
Aten above Amun,” he promised. “We can rule the way your father once
envisioned.”
Pharaoh rose and held onto his walking stick as if it could support his ebbing
life. “It was a mistake to raise you in Memphis,” he whispered. “You should have
been raised with your brother. Here. In Thebes.”
Amunhotep stood swiftly and his shoulders straightened. “You only have me,
father.” He offered his hand to the old man who had conquered a dozen lands.
“Take it. I may not be a warrior, but I will build a kingdom that will stand for
eternity.”
When it was clear that Pharaoh would not take Amunhotep’s hand, my father
stepped forward, saving the prince from embarrassment.
“Let your brother be buried,” he suggested quietly.
The look Amunhotep gave his father would have turned Anubis cold.
It was only when we returned on barges across the Nile, with the waves to drown
our voices, that anyone dared to speak.
“He is unstable,” my father pronounced on our way back to Akhmim. “For three
generations our family has given women to the Pharaohs of Egypt. But I will not
give one of my daughters to that man.”
I wrapped my wool cloak around my shoulders. It wasn’t me he was talking about.
It was my sister, Nefertiti.
“If Amunhotep is to be made co-regent with his father, he will need a Chief
Wife,” my mother said. “It will be Nefertiti or Kiya. And if it is Kiya…”
She left the words unspoken, but we all knew what she had meant to say. If it
was Kiya, then the Vizier Panahesi would have sway in Egypt. It would be easy
and logical to make his daughter queen: Kiya was already married to Amunhotep
and nearly three months pregnant with his child. But if she became Chief Wife
our family would bow to Panahesi’s, and that would be an unthinkable thing.
My father shifted his weight on his cushion, brooding while the servants rowed
north.
“Nefertiti has been told she will be a royal wife,” my mother added. “You told
her that.”
“When Tuthmosis was alive! When there was stability and it looked as if Egypt
would be ruled by…” my father closed his eyes.
I watched as the moon rose over the barge, and when enough time had passed, I
thought it safe to ask, “Father, what is Aten?”
He opened his eyes. “The sun,” he replied, staring at my mother. There were
thoughts passing between them, but no words.
“But Amun-Ra is god of the sun.”
“And Aten is the sun itself,” he said.
I didn’t understand. “But why would Amunhotep want to build temples to a sun-god
that no one has heard of?”
“Because if he builds temples to Aten there will be no need for the Priests of
Amun.”
I was shocked. “He wants to be rid of them?”
“Yes.” my father nodded. “And go against all the laws of Ma’at.”
I sucked in my breath. No one went against the goddess of truth. “But why?”
“Because the crown prince is weak,” my father explained. “Because he is weak and
shallow, and you should learn to recognize men who are afraid of others with
power, Mutnodjmet.”
My mother threw a sharp glance at him. It was treason, what my father just said,
but there was no one to hear it above the splash of the oars.
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